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Never ending pain

Who cares?
Body trembles
slaughtering war
Innocent pays the price
Corpse lying without lives
Unpleasant sound vibrates the ground
So called brave men feeling no sense of guilt
Will war resolve underlying issue?

Only the will power of negotiation
There might be some hopes for cessation
Rivers of blood without regrets
Christian, Jew and muslim, peace
Expand it to Palestine
No derive from life
Stop destruction
Call for peace

Kelleyana Junique

Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. 

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  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:32:00 AM
    once again thank you for your comments on my work. you are absolutely right abt the blame/ remorse thing. I struggle with the idea that ppl have done me wrong, while at the same instance, I cause suffering. keep writing because this poem took me somewhere in my mind. it was a lovely trip. :)

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 6:28:00 AM
    It is a very good poem, keep up the excellent work. you have a future here on the soup, which Myself and many others like, God bless

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 8:45:00 PM
    Very nice. You could post this on an anti-war site. It's that good. R.M.

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 3:12:00 AM
    thank you for your lovely comment on my new poem :).

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:41:00 AM
    first off, the message of this poem is very powerful. profound. the Etheree is such a beautiful form and you gave it all the justice it deserves.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 1:28:00 AM
    Brilliant Etheree with very profound message, Kelleyana. We could all learn from this. Become one is the answer. Also, thank you for your kind comments on 'The Writer', Lainie

  1. Date: 4/8/2011 4:29:00 PM
    Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 8:47:00 AM
    beautiful inspiring expressions on the war and peace, kelleyana

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 6:44:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Kelleyana. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol