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Naive Gentleman

I am quite the courteous gentleman Not the kind who sends naughty lines; Still, this pretty girl was winking, was I naïve? Being a new guy in the neighborhood, I waved; trying to be polite like Mom said I should. It began with her offer, coffee in the main room Ending with touches and flirting… the rise Of my blood a seismic boom! Clothes ruffled As my hands traveled along her skin, Before I knew it, we were reeling on the floor. I didn’t know her status; she didn’t wear a ring But she seemed playful and thrilled to hear My breath quaking. Then, the front door clicked; A man swooned, “Honey, I’m home.”I froze while posing behind a tall figurine. Rushing out that night, the oldest couple from a distance pressed, “Hey Miss, your black stockings are on your neck!” Nina Parmenter's Make Me Actually LOL 2 Re-post 3/.04.2019

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Date: 2/4/2014 1:45:00 PM
great win with this inventive write Nette congrats..'
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Date: 2/3/2014 2:40:00 PM
you are "the highness Poet", Nette!!!...i'm so fascinated with your piece.. my IDOLl!!! *_* Congratulations!!!
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Date: 2/3/2014 2:22:00 PM
Oh, my! Nicely composed and presented. Bravo, Poet!
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Date: 2/2/2014 1:21:00 PM
I think it is first place too...top spot....so so...YOU..perfect
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:16:00 AM
Ha ha, this is great! Congrats.
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Date: 2/2/2014 8:38:00 AM
Wow! an excellent presentation of a naive gentleman. I say here, ha ha..... . Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:51:00 PM
Wow! What an entertaining poem! This was an excellent write that had me laughing at the end. How naïve could such a man be!? I loved it! good luck in the contest Nette, I'm sure this poem has 1st place written all over it! :) xoxo
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Date: 2/1/2014 2:06:00 PM
No doubt you deserved this victory. Congrats Nette. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:18:00 AM
This was such a fun poem, and a surprise from you, so different than your usual......I can't help but smile at your versatility!! Well done, dear Nette!!
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Date: 2/1/2014 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your humorous take for this contest. and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2014 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", nette
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Date: 2/1/2014 1:38:00 AM
My kind of humour . Loved the poem . Thank you.
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Date: 1/31/2014 5:36:00 PM
Ha ha, this is a tremendous write, with great wit and humor! You had me glued to your poem trying to anticipate what was going to come next, only to see your great funny expression! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/31/2014 4:17:00 PM
Wow nette pretty funny! [The chose has been made we are on to sonnet 5, it was a torment to chose sorry I took so long] Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2014 2:55:00 PM
What a brilliant you have here Nette ! Good luck in the contest. Kayod5.
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Date: 1/31/2014 1:26:00 PM
Sometimes naughty situations backfire. I loved the comic scene especially the eldest couple part. Imagining Mr. Bean as the male character, lol! This is funny and smart.
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Date: 1/31/2014 12:27:00 PM
- Yes, some are real naive ..... a good suggestion for this contest, completely different from the others I have read - Good luck, Nette!! - Have a pleasant weekend, relax!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2014 11:45:00 AM
awesome and well crafted Nette!
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Date: 1/31/2014 10:31:00 AM
....Psss., I AM The Resurrection Martha, And The Life: No One, Comes Unto THE FATHER, Except Through ME.... *.*
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Date: 1/31/2014 10:24:00 AM
*.* Without Beginning Nor End *.*
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Date: 1/31/2014 10:22:00 AM
† Pss., *.* This Holy Thing, Shall Thus Then Be Called, "THE SON OF 'GOD.'" (*....
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Date: 1/31/2014 10:18:00 AM
† Ps., Have I Been This Long With You Philip, .... Heaven Parting Her Curtains, Angels Gazing Creation, Watching Cherubs Smiling, 'Look, Daddyyyy's A Baby *.*
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