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I am quite the courteous gentleman Not the kind who sends naughty lines; Still, this pretty girl was winking, was I naïve? Being a new guy in the neighborhood, I waved; trying to be nice like Mom said I should. It began with her offer, coffee in the main room Ending with touches and flirting… the rise Of my blood a seismic boom! Clothes ruffled As my hands traveled along her skin, Before I knew it, we were reeling on the floor. I didn’t know her status; she didn’t wear a ring But she seemed playful and thrilled to hear My breath heaving. Then, the front door clicked; A man crooned, “Honey, I’m home.”I suddenly froze while posing behind a tall figurine. Rushing out, the oldest couple from a distance pressed, “Hey Miss, your black stockings are on your neck!” Dr. Ram's Contest: Honey, I'm Home by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 1:45:00 PM
    great win with this inventive write Nette congrats..'

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 2:40:00 PM
    you are "the highness Poet", Nette!!!...i'm so fascinated with your piece.. my IDOLl!!! *_* Congratulations!!!

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 2:22:00 PM
    Oh, my! Nicely composed and presented. Bravo, Poet!

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 1:21:00 PM
    I think it is first place so...YOU..perfect

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 9:16:00 AM
    Ha ha, this is great! Congrats.

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 8:38:00 AM
    Wow! an excellent presentation of a naive gentleman. I say here, ha ha..... . Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 5:51:00 PM
    Wow! What an entertaining poem! This was an excellent write that had me laughing at the end. How naïve could such a man be!? I loved it! good luck in the contest Nette, I'm sure this poem has 1st place written all over it! :) xoxo

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 2:06:00 PM
    No doubt you deserved this victory. Congrats Nette. Kayod5.

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 10:18:00 AM
    This was such a fun poem, and a surprise from you, so different than your usual......I can't help but smile at your versatility!! Well done, dear Nette!!

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 9:52:00 AM
    Congratulations Nette on your humorous take for this contest. and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 6:11:00 AM
    Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", nette

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 1:38:00 AM
    My kind of humour . Loved the poem . Thank you.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 10:36:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Nette. Thanks for visiting my site. Bev

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 5:36:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is a tremendous write, with great wit and humor! You had me glued to your poem trying to anticipate what was going to come next, only to see your great funny expression! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 4:17:00 PM
    Wow nette pretty funny! [The chose has been made we are on to sonnet 5, it was a torment to chose sorry I took so long] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 2:55:00 PM
    What a brilliant you have here Nette ! Good luck in the contest. Kayod5.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 1:26:00 PM
    Sometimes naughty situations backfire. I loved the comic scene especially the eldest couple part. Imagining Mr. Bean as the male character, lol! This is funny and smart.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 12:27:00 PM
    - Yes, some are real naive ..... a good suggestion for this contest, completely different from the others I have read - Good luck, Nette!! - Have a pleasant weekend, relax!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:45:00 AM
    awesome and well crafted Nette!

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 10:31:00 AM
    ....Psss., I AM The Resurrection Martha, And The Life: No One, Comes Unto THE FATHER, Except Through ME.... *.*