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Lover's Cruise

My love, when will it last, the heart o' mine longing for you, with each beat of my pulse, solely dedicated too. I offer you my life, and promise that forever, I'll be yours and you're mine, no one can break us apart. Oh, tell when it's wrong, to fight for love and conquers all, Why does it need to break our wings, to fly freely beyond this earth. Hold my hands and close your eyes, the night is ours, let's cruise the lines. Nothing's gonna stop us now, I am yours and you are mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/8/2023 7:35:00 PM
Well don, love it
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Date: 5/8/2023 3:26:00 PM
A wonderful and imaginative poem about adoration. Loved it!
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Date: 7/15/2015 2:57:00 PM
this is a nice lyrical poem I found way back here from 2013! I see it won a ballad contest once. So a very belated congrats for that!
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Date: 12/19/2013 1:46:00 PM
Aiyah. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/19/2013 3:11:00 PM
oh....thank you, LInda :)) ..i'm speechless..hehe...Thank you so much!!! ^_^

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