In Blue

The evening sky rests upon a cobalt blue comforter 
As pinpoints of light descended downward through the heavens 
Constellations standing steadfast in a slow drift 
As the earth rotates slowly beneath them 
From Orion to Ursa Major 
They stood together for the casual viewer 
I have often wondered how that star that stands alone 
Feels in its seclusion 
Sometimes the loneliest star shines the brightest 
But will we appreciate its beauty? 
Lost in a cast of “billions” 
Some have long burned out 
Appearing only as a memory 
Passed on from light years away 
Diamonds that glitter in an endless sky 
A voice that drowns in its silence 
As planets tiptoe slowly 
an eternal dance unfolds 
In Blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/17/2011 8:38:00 AM
Hi Bill, you have wonderful visuals in your poems, I love reading. Thank you
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:35:00 AM
u spoke for all of us Bill with your super comment on my PD entry.. it was a tough one but I hope I nailed it luv.. putting it straight out there in plain language .. hope it does some good at some point in time luv..thankxx ..
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:25:00 PM
Bill u exude beautiful imagery in your poetry.. feel so mesmerized by these lines .. luv..
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