First Spring Flowers

Die ersten Frühlingsbumen / First Spring Flowers / Primeras flores de primavera  

Langsames Erwachen
Die ersten Frühlingsblumen
Und eine Amsel


Slow Awakening
The first spring flowers
And a blackbird 


Lento despertar
Primeras flores de primavera
También un mirlo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/5/2011 8:12:00 PM
I can picture the plants stretching and yawning as they awaken, Gert. Your Haiku paints another spring scenery so well. Can't wait to see them all in bloom! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:34:00 AM
Lovely images you give here, Gert :) How was your weekend-- and your arm? I hope it is feeling better by now-- ingat lagi & Alles Gute :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:18:00 PM
Nice Haiku, Gert! Usually Haiku have 5-7-5 syllable counts, but perhaps it is not required. I love the picture you portrayed with it. Thanks for sharing. Alles Gute! Caroline.
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:42:00 PM
oooh, i just loved that little blackbird thrown in there at the end. It made it extra special!!
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:14:00 AM
awesome image of a buddung spring with the use of " contrast" approach, gert... lo he pasado realmente bien reading this..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:35:00 AM
Muy bonito. Yes! Those crows are kaw-kawing up a storm around here, but we just got another snowstorm. Bummer. I don't think the crows are bonito - or is it bonita? - just negro/negra. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:52:00 AM
Will appreciate this view shortly on my front porch Gert my friend... as your lovely words encourage Spring to appear soon.. thankxx for your lovely comments on my poetry and appreciate the kudos for contest entries luv.. means so much to a "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful visual of the early dawn with apt images, Gert
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:04:00 AM
What a lovely image of spring, Gert. The flowers are already slowly awakening here and birds of many colors are starting nests in trees. I hope you entered this haiku in Carol's contest, dear friend. It's perfect! I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:04:00 AM
Enjoyed this Gert...we have a whole flock of red winged blackbirds at the park where I run..they are gorgeous. BG
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