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Fancy, Reverie and Whimsy

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Fancy, Reverie and Whimsy

~~ In my dreams, my imagination creates flights of fancy, reverie and whimsy, out of this world incredible. Sometimes wonderful but most often nightmarish, the dreamy fairy-tale holds me prisoner, trapped. Often I am lost in a lavish forest green. Searching for an answer to questions of the past, horrible, hateful, heinous monsters are at each curve. The path a winding labyrinth of tangled vines, I rest beside a meandering stream where the sun shines. A black horse with a bell calls my name. Upon his back I leave the forest for meadows free, abloom with flowers rustling in the breeze. We thunder up a hill until we reach the very top, and he unfolds majestic wings and we float. I am drifting now on filigree, white puffy clouds, gently lulled into a sweet dreamy ethereal world. Then I am free falling, down and down and down, screaming for help that never ever comes. And I open my eyes with a gasping breath. ~~ June 21, 2013 Verse For the contest, Fantasy

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:07:00 AM
    A thrilling poem, full of imagination Constance. No stopping in the middle, had to fine out how it end. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Ii've had these dreams of falling. Well described. Congratulations. Lve, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:42:00 PM
    an awesome fantasy poem... congrats :-) love LINDA

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 5:23:00 AM
    Hi Constance lovely poem ty for entering congrats on your win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:45:00 PM
    This is a very fearful write, full of special images within it! You have painted a rather scarey poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:08:00 PM
    ah, just seen this one - sounds pretty scary, my friend - especially loved the horse part