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Echoes of the Soul

An opelescent sky is casting such glow Hourglass moments a sip of sweet wine I watch my truth sieve,suddenly I know Life is a grain of sand in a bucket of time A speck of dust out shines my shooting star Its dazzling spark soon fades to nothingness An inner journey that echoes a soul's bazaar Trading a wish for a gallant heart's prowess Memories ripple,as I unscroll,the illusion Turning back the pages to a summer's joy I recall the vibrant flower's sweet infusion Everyday was a blessing for us to enjoy Time is of the essence,love a full necessity Let us sift mindfully, cause life is full of brevity Collaboration by : Mystic Rose Charmaine Chircop Tnks so much Mystic Rose( Vienna) for giving me the opportunity to participate in this sonnet (my first : )

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/1/2014 9:17:00 AM

For some reason this title attracted me back to it. I enjoyed reading it again.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/31/2014 9:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your first sonnet a second time.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/19/2013 8:06:00 PM

Hi Charmy, Now this is the kind of poetry I enjoy most, this is lovely, the feel of floating in the mist of time comes across perfectly. A wonderful write, congratulations to both of you. Take care, Richard

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/11/2013 12:14:00 PM

This is a very creative and vivid poem. I love the second line. Congratulations on the efforts of your collaboration.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 10/11/2013 1:48:00 AM

Like sunrise after after a stormy night this collaboration Is full of light and inspiration. It is well done. Thank You.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/2/2013 6:55:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, A lovely write and collaboration. Ken

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/1/2013 12:34:00 AM

This is awesome,,,, you both did awesome job ;} this should turn into a winner ;}

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/21/2013 2:44:00 PM

Ok this was a good collaboration. very good both of you seemed very polished. Vee and i did a collab a long time ago when she was new to the soup. but i can, or i cannot really see who did what but it shows that you two are compatable. thank you for remembering April. Your special because of that.

Chris Boskovski

Date: 9/18/2013 10:55:00 PM

Hello Charma, I've missed you. I love your beautiful words that melt off the page, and now that you and My darling Mystic have teamed together to write such epic, genius poetry what an honor to read. What powerful and lovely writing a great poem! Signed the blue poet! xoxoxo hugs and kisses all around! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/18/2013 5:03:00 PM

Oh the pair of you turned words into magic....two lovely ladies, wrote an exceptionally beautiful poetry! A lovely pairing! ........and ps.......such a beautiful picture is your new avatar!! You are gorgeous, Charmaine!

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/18/2013 12:41:00 PM

For the first attempt this is fantastic. I missed your writing during my absence. Well done!!

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/18/2013 10:54:00 AM

lovely work...love your new pic too......TAH

James Peranteau

Date: 9/17/2013 7:09:00 PM

Wise these words dear poet ! I so enjoyed your mindful lead into the truths of life in truth ! Wonderful write my dear poetic friend....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2013 5:43:00 PM

wow, for first time sonnet, this is AWESOME. I congratulate you both and I see this really taking a top place in the contest!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2013 5:11:00 PM

A stunning piece! Amazing first one. Bravo!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/17/2013 10:03:00 AM

your last comment on my sonnet was you had never written one before, well you sure had a brilliant teacher in vie, and this for a first from you is so awesome....

Cindy Lu

Date: 9/16/2013 4:10:00 PM

You both did well with this collaboration! Wow.. excellent work here..... Cindy

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/16/2013 11:47:00 AM

HI, I meant lovely below..lol I just noticed my typo..Lovely write.. Ken

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2013 11:26:00 AM

well,well.. two beautiful ladies creating such languid, soulful work.. i am impressed; this is wonfer-full!..:) huggs, vie and charms

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/16/2013 10:06:00 AM

Charmaine Chircop and Mystic Rose... an fantastic collaboration! Your avatar is so stunning! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/16/2013 5:50:00 AM

Hi, A most lonely write with melodic flow.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/16/2013 5:05:00 AM

I LIKE WERE LIFE IS A GRAIN OF SAND IN A BUCKET OF TIME QUACK SUCH A SPARK A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE LEAVES ONE WANTING MORE OH I LOVE YOUR NEW PICTURE

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/16/2013 2:00:00 AM

Lovely....full of truth and light! Great job you two! HUGS!!! TWO LOVELY LADIES!!!!!

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/15/2013 9:26:00 PM

Beautifully stated here. The last line truly does say it all. Excellent job, Charmaine.