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Echoes of the soul

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Echoes of the soul

An opelescent sky is casting such glow Hourglass moments a sip of sweet wine I watch my truth sieve,suddenly I know Life is a grain of sand in a bucket of time A speck of dust out shines my shooting star Its dazzling spark soon fades to nothingness An inner journey that echoes a soul's bazaar Trading a wish for a gallant heart's prowess Memories ripple,as I unscroll,the illusion Turning back the pages to a summer's joy I recall the vibrant flower's sweet infusion Everyday was a blessing for us to enjoy Time is of the essence,love a full necessity Let us sift mindfully, cause life is full of brevity Collaboration by : Mystic Rose Charmaine Chircop Tnks so much Mystic Rose( Vienna) for giving me the opportunity to participate in this sonnet (my first : )

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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 9:17:00 AM
    For some reason this title attracted me back to it. I enjoyed reading it again.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 9:22:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your first sonnet a second time.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Hi Charmy, Now this is the kind of poetry I enjoy most, this is lovely, the feel of floating in the mist of time comes across perfectly. A wonderful write, congratulations to both of you. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:14:00 PM
    This is a very creative and vivid poem. I love the second line. Congratulations on the efforts of your collaboration.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Like sunrise after after a stormy night this collaboration Is full of light and inspiration. It is well done. Thank You.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:55:00 AM
    Hi Charmaine, A lovely write and collaboration. Ken

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:34:00 AM
    This is awesome,,,, you both did awesome job ;} this should turn into a winner ;}

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:31:00 PM
    You and Vienna had written a beautiful poem. A great collaboration, if it's for the contest: good luck!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:44:00 PM
    Ok this was a good collaboration. very good both of you seemed very polished. Vee and i did a collab a long time ago when she was new to the soup. but i can, or i cannot really see who did what but it shows that you two are compatable. thank you for remembering April. Your special because of that.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Hello Charma, I've missed you. I love your beautiful words that melt off the page, and now that you and My darling Mystic have teamed together to write such epic, genius poetry what an honor to read. What powerful and lovely writing a great poem! Signed the blue poet! xoxoxo hugs and kisses all around! :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Oh the pair of you turned words into magic....two lovely ladies, wrote an exceptionally beautiful poetry! A lovely pairing! ........and ps.......such a beautiful picture is your new avatar!! You are gorgeous, Charmaine!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:41:00 PM
    For the first attempt this is fantastic. I missed your writing during my absence. Well done!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:54:00 AM
    lovely your new pic too......TAH

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Wise these words dear poet ! I so enjoyed your mindful lead into the truths of life in truth ! Wonderful write my dear poetic friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:43:00 PM
    wow, for first time sonnet, this is AWESOME. I congratulate you both and I see this really taking a top place in the contest!!!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:11:00 PM
    A stunning piece! Amazing first one. Bravo!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 10:03:00 AM
    your last comment on my sonnet was you had never written one before, well you sure had a brilliant teacher in vie, and this for a first from you is so awesome....

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:10:00 PM
    You both did well with this collaboration! Wow.. excellent work here..... Cindy

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:47:00 AM
    HI, I meant lovely I just noticed my typo..Lovely write.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:26:00 AM
    well,well.. two beautiful ladies creating such languid, soulful work.. i am impressed; this is wonfer-full!..:) huggs, vie and charms