Wrinkles

Wrinkle, wrinkle on my face…

Couldn't you have found some other place ?

What made you furrow between my eyes ?

And all those creams, they are nothing but lies….

When I look in the mirror, all I can see…

Is a silver haired person staring back at me….

Then there are the lines , which run down the sides of my nose…

Running in circles, round my lips, down my neck and into my clothes….

Speaking of clothes , isn’t that where the wrinkles should be ?

Is nature playing a trick on me ?

Or is this a sign “ old “ is sneaking up on me ?

It seems only yesterday I was a young girl .. and had my whole life ahead of me…

So simple..so free……

Which don’t take me wrong I have enjoyed my life’s ride…

And there isn’t much in my life, I haven’t tried….

But it should would be nice if I could just see…

Myself with one less wrinkle…when I looked back at me…..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/1/2013 11:00:00 AM
Try Photoshop. It can erase wrinkles. Another clever poem. Congratulations. Allan
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Date: 12/1/2013 2:15:00 PM
sorry Allan...NOTE..I spelled your name correctly this time...Photoshop ? that is only a temporary solution to a permanent problem...hmmm perhaps another poem ? thanks for the compliment...
Date: 11/23/2013 3:40:00 AM
You are a hoot, KJ!! I had me a good laugh on this one. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:10:00 AM
delysia...Thank you for the visit and glad you got a chuckle..I know I do when I look in the mirror, beats crying...
Date: 11/1/2013 11:48:00 AM
Heartfelt words, appreciated and understood. Only wisdom ransoms time, or would you really rather be back in the dating scene? Thanks, Mark
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:32:00 PM
Mark..Back in the dating scene...Bite your tongue ! but thanks for commenting...appreciated..
Date: 10/31/2013 5:01:00 AM
- Nice to read your poem kj. - Age drawings come with age, wrinkles are wisdom. - Unnatural with a wrinkle-free face on people who are "old". -Smile at your reflection. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2013 8:17:00 AM
If wrinkles are a sign of wisdom..I must be the wisest in the land ! ...trust me when I look in the mirror I smile a lot..hahaha..thanks for stopping by..
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