" Charmaine "

1 " A thorn in my Heart " " Feeling their pain, deep : Indeed " " Touched my Heart and Soul " ( Charmaine Chircop ) 2 I thought to myself How can I help Haiti "Touch their Heart and Soul" ( HG ) Dedicated to the "Malta Princess" Charmaine Chircop Author's Note : The First Senryu is Charmaine's Words in a Comment To my POEM " MIATIANNA " The Second Senryu is My Response

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/10/2010 5:22:00 AM

great job

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/30/2010 3:02:00 AM

Thanks my dear brother ,friend,chef:)..tnks for using my comment,and i can see from a simple comment of an amateur,you ve created a senryu and you ve created more love to our Haitan brothers and sisters,It is a thorn in my Heart,knowing how many left family behind,how many dont have a bed,a shelter, how many ended up alone,It breaks my heart,knowing nothing can soothe their pain..Your words are pearls,Your Heart is as big as the Globe..thanks for being my friend...Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 10:03:00 PM

Charmaine's comment reveals the love she shares with all. What a wonderful lady we are blessed to have on Poetry Soup. Very nice dedication, HG. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/29/2010 8:58:00 PM

Your poetic heart is on fire, I am enjoyed your creative tributes...Raul