" Carolyn "

1 " This is so Moving " " News reports," ( Feature ) " Children " ( Love ) " to these Orphans " ( Carolyn Devonshire ) 2 You have moved my Heart You Brave Children of Haiti Your Spirit Lives On ( HG ) Dedicated to ( History Poetess ) " Carolyn Devonshire " Author's Note : The First Senryu is Carolyn's Words In a Comment to my POEM : " MIATIANNA " The Second Senryu is my Response

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June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/24/2010 3:19:00 PM

My heart goes out to the people of Haiti, nice poem for them. I gave to the Red Cross to help out as best I could. Ellen

John Freeman

Date: 1/31/2010 11:00:00 AM

A very fiting dedication to a sweetheart of ps. HG, sincerly, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 5:24:00 PM

hahaha, you are capturing so well our essence. I also think of Carolyn as the history poetess!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/30/2010 3:04:00 AM

Carolyn,wherever i go i shall always remeber Carolyn as a friend who puts a smile on my face,a sensitive caring lady, a forever friend and a talented poet who makes History interesting much more then my english teacher used to,lovely tribute to a lovely Woman,,Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 9:54:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your beautiful Miatianna with us, HG. You've touched me deeply with both that poem and this one. God bless you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/29/2010 8:57:00 PM

The inspiration you use is boundless, great work HG...Raul