A Whole Week Color-Mania

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Colors will always make my  life happier,
They also make my whole world brighter
       What if there’s no color?
       I think,  I’ve  no life galore
And I cannot make myself much prettier.

So, I’ve got a more fantastic idea,
To show everyone my color-mania
     For Monday Luck,  I wear red
     From my feet to my head
Like a  dragon of New Year in China.

Then comes the next day, it’s Tuesday
Keeping  aura,  I’ve color of sun ray
    Yellow dress  and jewelries,
    They say,  I’ve  hepatitis
But, I don’t care no matter what they say.

Then comes the third day of the week,
More work are done making me weak
    To conceal my exhaustion 
    Green color shows pretention
That my life and vigor are still at peak.

Thursday comes so perfectly great,
I wear purple , also my favorite
    Purple  fingernails and lips,
    Its on me up to the tips
And I get smiles from whoever I meet.

Friday, the last day of my  office work,
On this day,  rainbow color over perk
   I use multi-colored things,
   Feeling of joy they’ll  bring
 No one says I carry myself like a quirk.

Saturday and Sunday are weekends, 
Still, work and activities never end
    Two days, I’ll be all in pink
    People see me can’t wink
Tickled pink that I look so young my friend.




Sept. 22, 2012

First Place
Contest: Colors
Judged: 10/15/2013
Sponsor: Poetess Skat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/20/2013 6:14:00 PM
A wonderful first place winner. Good for you. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/20/2013 2:39:00 PM
A very interesting, unique, and colorful poem, Leonora! I agree, colors do affect our moods. So, why not wear those that make us happy? Fantastic work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again. Warm hugs to you! :)
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:02:00 PM
So charming is this colorful poem !! Congratulations dear !!
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:48:00 AM
I enjoyed your week of color Leonora ...congratulations!
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:06:00 AM
colors colors, and colors, the more the merrier... I love the happy feeling in your poem and win... Leo, my sweet sis.. you are amazing, in writing these limericks.. enjoyed it the first time loving it once again. Very clever of you. I think the last one's my fav. and LOL, the second to the last was pretty funny... haha.. Thanks for the lovely visits... sending hugs your way... LINDA
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Date: 10/16/2013 10:13:00 AM
Leonora a delightful pen congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/15/2013 9:57:00 PM
Leonora, such a pretty poem. i went all crazy while reading your poem out loud............... congrats.......... SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:07:00 PM
Very varied and interesting person of the work world but a quiet female on days of rest..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2012 7:17:00 AM
young and cute as a doll....smiles!
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:18:00 PM
LOL, great limericks, my friend : )
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Date: 9/24/2012 5:44:00 AM
love your colors LEO,enhancing your beauty,colorful write loved it
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Date: 9/23/2012 10:42:00 PM
Leonora, i love colors.. wish we could color together. I love every color you pictured here.. you took me right into the picture. and i love the way you end it in pink..wink wink... like I said you are sweet. by the way my favorite colors are Green & Pink... how about you... did you see my rainbow contest... xox~pd
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Date: 9/23/2012 1:56:00 PM
What a colorful poem this is. Cool idea to show different colors for different days of the week. Way to think outside the box,my friend.
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Date: 9/23/2012 11:43:00 AM
Colors have a lot to say. Some colors make you happy the second makes you sad. Well written Leonora. Have a wonderful Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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