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---of weeping dreams

I hung my verses in the wind, time and tide their faults may find . . . . . . . . Ralph Waldo Emerson, Poet ~~^~~ As my eyes drop, I look into my weeping heart, and send words adrift in time and tide. I, a ship that through, the ocean glides, seeking a secret star to guide the way. The storms of life, has shadowed my journey, off course, roaming, far adrift and lost. I float in darkness, and hidden are the perils, my aching tears become part of the mist. Yet, I still have hope, that life will be bright again, with lovely lights instead of deep grief. My verses floating, my words a secret trembling, with only time and tide as their destiny. ~~^~~ "Fool!" said my Muse to me, "look into your heart and write!" . . . . .Sir Philip Sidney, Poet July 9, 2013 Verse Entered into the contest, Late Night Poems

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:34:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Broken, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Always Linda

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:25:00 PM
    awesome Nate

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Constance, you surround your poem with famous excerpts yet I enjoyed the verse in between even more!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:58:00 PM
    I know Sidney but will have to check out Waldo Emerson. beautiful write indeed, my friend

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:27:00 AM
    A touching write here Constance.Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:51:00 AM
    something of a short story that flows as the ocean into my thoughts, such calmness comes into this write, enjoyed this one, and good luck on the contest, have a blessed day,, ~always, p.d.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:53:00 AM
    This is a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this morning! I enjoyed in particular this line, "my aching tears become part of the mist," where you painted a brilliant picture of the tears being enveloped by the mist itself! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:17:00 AM
    He sits above the clang and dust of Time, with the worlds secret trembling on his lips . . . " William Watson, Poet, referring to his Muse