A Child With Child Part 1

" A Child With Child"   (Part 1)

She made a mistake Her future was at stake Already two months with child She decided not to hide Had to tell somebody It just could not be anybody.

Her thoughts went to her mother afraid to tell her father or her brother
Knocking on her mothers door when opened knelt on the floor please mama forgive me don’t forsake me I am your child but with child.

Her mother’s reaction quickly took action slapped hard on her face screamed
 “What a disgrace” took her by her hand tossed her outside on the sand
She knew that was the end.

Quickly decided to defend Herself and her unborn she will fight and not be thrown and will make it on her own.

Her life started When she departed From her own home In search of another home. Although she was alone She kept dreaming of her unborn.

One day her newborn was born a boy opening her arms held him like a toy
As she  felt no more a child and promised to take care of her child.

Two years passed away they were so happy and gay He was the sunshine of her day even after a working day. When she was home He never left her sight.

Until late one night She woke up to a bang Thinking someone rang She ran to open the door But there he was her son Laying on the floor.

Grabbing him close to her heart Just ran outside Having no time to cry Or even try To see if he was alive But prayed he would survive.

She believed in fate at the hospital gate she gave her son away hoping in no delay anyone ! someone ! please oh God ! help me!

Waking up she heard a noise than a voice looking up a white shadow was wiping her tears Held her hand Needless to utter another word
She felt the sword go straight to her heart and just fell apart as she knew that was the end my only son is gone forever and ever..
Good bye.

Therese Bacha
12/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/21/2013 10:23:00 AM
Ps., Rarely It Seems Does A Poem Bring Tears Unto These Eyes Thus I Shall Favour The Both Of Your Treasures. *
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Date: 7/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
Listening Unto Hootie And The Blowfish's Song, Time,' You Ain't No Friend Of Mine ˜ Time You Left Me Here, Like A Tree Growing All Alone ? You Just Stripped Me Bare, Strripped Me Bare ˜ Your Beauty's Piercing Poem Had Tears Flowing From My Eyes; Good Job ˜ Congratualtions, Upon Your Outstanding As Deeply Touching Feature And, 'It's All About Love." ˜ Love, John
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:26:00 AM
Good morning Terry, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy the up coming week. :-) love <3 LINDA
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:24:00 AM
Touching. Congrats on the feature. There are times when a child with child just needs a hug and assurance that everything will be okay.
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Date: 7/18/2013 3:45:00 AM
This isca beautiful poem
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. This is a great poem.... Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2013 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Lucy. See u later Terry xoxo
Date: 4/5/2013 10:01:00 AM
Going to read part II. Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/5/2013 10:39:00 AM
Good Lucy, we will stay in touch. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 3/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
That is how it was that days if a woman.gets pregnant before.marriage she.had to give it.up..I would have followed the.footsteps above if it happened to me...I would try.to.make a future for my child.even if destimy predicts otherwise.Im touched.by this gem and am so.grateful for the right of freedom we have in 2013..Very.deep..
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/5/2013 10:41:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, thank you my dear friend...will write.love Terry xoxoxoox
Date: 1/1/2013 3:00:00 PM
Nicely done Terry,,,,, I need to read the rest of the story. Have a blessed New Years ;}
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2013 4:00:00 PM
Again Thank You Debbie....i get encouraged to write when You read my poems......xoxo Terry
Date: 12/24/2012 8:47:00 PM
Terry, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 12/24/2012 10:37:00 PM
Linda....you have no idea how much i missed you those past 2 days......i got used to see you around me.......you are a wonderful friend.......so warm .so full of feelings.....thank you for being YOU.....Merry Christmas to you to....i wish you from the depth of heart all the very best wishes full of love and peace to your soul......Love always to you to....Terry.....
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