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August 16

Ignition...on and in perhaps an hour, it was over. One slash of time made ridicule of caution, for the silence that he chose was not enough; he hated it, chose death instead, and that without regret. I wonder just how long it was the engine poured its fumes into his ambience, and he beyond a care... how many passed just yards away, how many chronicles raced with them, past the brute unconsciousness of the undead, as they sped by. It was a double silence that prevailed upon the darkening day-- a double irony as that frail candle smoldered when its destiny was light. ~

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Date: 8/22/2012 4:52:00 AM
just read your reply to michelle's comment, soup mailing you...
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:39:00 PM
been there, plumbed those depths of darkness..."our poetic thoughts are so similar" (so are our not-so-poetic thoughts hehe)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/21/2012 5:12:00 PM
hmmmmm Why, whatever could you mean?
Date: 8/21/2012 9:15:00 AM
A sad event, Dean. Those cars rushing past and not a soul was conscious of what was happening "yards away".:( Something that probably happens too often. It's difficut to determine the deciding point but it can leave others with countless questions and sorrow. Keep well!! Love, Mikki
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/21/2012 5:16:00 PM
Just another in a series of pieces on my son's very untimely passing.

Book: Shattered Sighs