August 16

Ignition...on
and in perhaps an hour,  it was over.
One slash of time made ridicule
of caution, for the silence that he chose
was not enough; he hated it,
chose death instead, 
and that without regret.

I wonder just how long it was
the engine poured its fumes
into his ambience,
and he beyond a care...
how many passed just yards away,
how many chronicles raced  with them, 
 past the brute unconsciousness
of the undead, as they sped by.

It was a double silence that prevailed
upon the darkening day--
a double irony as that frail candle
smoldered when its destiny
was light.
        ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/22/2012 4:52:00 AM
just read your reply to michelle's comment, soup mailing you...
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:39:00 PM
been there, plumbed those depths of darkness..."our poetic thoughts are so similar" (so are our not-so-poetic thoughts hehe)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/21/2012 5:12:00 PM
hmmmmm Why, whatever could you mean?
Date: 8/21/2012 9:15:00 AM
A sad event, Dean. Those cars rushing past and not a soul was conscious of what was happening "yards away".:( Something that probably happens too often. It's difficut to determine the deciding point but it can leave others with countless questions and sorrow. Keep well!! Love, Mikki
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/21/2012 5:16:00 PM
Just another in a series of pieces on my son's very untimely passing.
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