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Natures Praise

Enchanting hills laugh
Beyond the ridge of nature  
Afternoons shimmer


Countryside’s beam light
From the sunsets of glory 
Upon the white birch

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Bill Frew

Date: 3/23/2010 12:35:00 PM

Yes Laura nature deserves much praise.Thanx for a great write!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:50:00 AM

Lovely and peaceful imagery. It gives an escape from reality to a different reality...where nature uplifts the soul. Very nice, Laura. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/15/2010 10:53:00 AM

You have created another sublime Haiku...Nature in all its splendor! Good luck in in Brian Strand's contest, if you have entered it. I have received my trophy this morning, Laura! It is the first trophy I've have ever received! It will inspire me and boost my writing career! I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 3/13/2010 12:24:00 PM

Reading these haikus I immediately thought of a Pow Wow we enjoy up north Wisconsin. The drive was long. There were many Indian Birch trees along the way. Driving back home it was dusk and as the sun set the sights were beautiful. Nice poems here.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/12/2010 6:45:00 PM

Lovely Haikus Laura. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2010 10:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fine poetry today Laura. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration and do share more of your amazing poetry with us. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/12/2010 9:12:00 AM

Hey Laura, this is a beauty....I've asked Audrey to leave this comment on my behalf......Jimmy