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...we meld as roots twine

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...we meld as roots twine

we meld as roots twine 
bark nor storm infringe on love 
death, cold, raw, a pauper’s dream...         

braid graceful passion
bend before heart’s storm...           
engulf beginnings

honeyed breath kiss on
life dancing on, babies born 
tagged in blissful wondering...

forever mine dear
a bed to begin and to end...
embrace of me

*A wedding verse in Sedoka Form

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  1. Date: 9/27/2010 9:02:00 AM
    "Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's win! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Deborah in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 8:13:00 AM
    Big Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's success in Dr Ram great contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:28:00 AM
    Many congratulations Deborah on your win in Dr.Ram's fine contest. Must look up this form, not one I have heard off. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:10:00 AM
    Congrats Debbie on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest exceptional piece TEACH.. enjoy your wonderful win this happy Sunday with luv.. from pupil in luv...luv...luv..

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:24:00 AM
    I enjoyed your quite unique approach to the theme of the contest. Debbie

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Lovely images here. Thank you for sharing your work =) love, farah

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:04:00 AM
    The imagery of marriage here is blinding my eyes Deborah, you have captured the truth of marriage and it's bliss. Love it. Love, Sami.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 5:50:00 PM
    enjoyed reading today...I never check this form out...will have to try one.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 3:38:00 PM orginal! "life dancing on...babies born tagged in blissful wondering...." wonderful do you do it?

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 3:14:00 PM
    Nice one D.G., how have you been,..p.d.