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...hurt knife's edge of pain

hurt knife’s edge of pain
sear the gut punch of sorrow…
return innocence

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  1. Date: 10/10/2010 5:38:00 PM
    thanks Deb for your sweet congrats. sadly, my dog is dying. brain tumor, suffering seizures every day. so, I am a real mess. but I love ya. hope all is well by you - this poem is not happy. hugs, here if you need me. xoxoxoxo

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 12:55:00 AM
    aoup mail waiting-Charles

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 3:12:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 7:02:00 PM
    very interesting image, Deb!

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:03:00 PM
    Mercy me and OUCH, Cher!... I feel your pain!...Beautiful senryu which I can identify with for sure...Thanks for your comment on "Gaurdian Angels" too which I know you are already familiar with...that really meant alot to me, you know? - Tim

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 3:16:00 PM
    Corrected my entry to the best of my ability TEACH.. so hope it fits the contest criteria.. will be busy rest of evening ..its morning here.. and I see its closed already luv.. pupil..good luckk awesome idea..

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 5:12:00 AM
    A first smile after a cascade of tears and sorrow is a blessing. Sometimes when I hurt I think of the days when I was a child, when I was innocent and didn't feel the taste of pain. It's harder to return to innocence when you are a grown up, but not impossible. Inspiring haiku, Deborah. Emily

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 10:28:00 AM
    Hi Deborah, I totally changed penny lane it may make more sense now.Cheers

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 10:17:00 AM
    Deborah, you MAY have entered. I don't know. John has the contest entries. Why don't you check to see if you already entered. I do appreciate your support of John's contest very much! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 10:10:00 AM
    Very, very powerful punch to this senryu. I hope you will enter John's contest. He can't figure out what happened to all the limerick writers. I think people are just having trouble getting permission to rewrite someone else's limerick. I'm sure John would allow you to rewrite one of his and you could choose from any of mine. We'd really like to close out this contest. I don't think there will be any losers -- there never are in John's contests. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 6:59:00 AM
    powerful write Deborah... very enjoyed. always Michael

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 6:26:00 AM
    Wish we could have this happen TEACH however .. not.. luv your title ..its very creative and apropos to the poem's content.. last line ..power packed.. good luck.. from high in the sky pupil..luv..

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 6:15:00 AM
    you need a savior