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....Backlit Dawn Lovers

backlit dawn lovers
gray shades the cut cameo...
bookmarks of passion

dedicationlovesenryu

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2010 3:05:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/20/2010 12:58:00 AM

Powerful images of passion in this one, Deb. XOXOX Lovingly, Dane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2010 5:29:00 PM

That last line is very inventive, Deb!!

Sue Mason

Date: 5/19/2010 8:16:00 AM

WOW ... wonderful Senryu here!! You've got mail ...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/18/2010 6:52:00 PM

great write on the photo

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/17/2010 10:52:00 PM

I love these bookmarks of passion Deb....Awesome work dear friend of mine..Charma

. Dabomb™

Date: 5/17/2010 5:24:00 PM

Nice write, much enjoyed!;)

Isa Mahrie

Date: 5/17/2010 9:21:00 AM

Thank you for asking me Deb :) will write soon ... wow what a inteligently make the reader to Think last line is the stamp yet midlle line is my fav .... hope you well Deb :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2010 6:20:00 AM

I think you have written this spot on to the photo in your Senryu Deb. I am not sure anymore but just me I think it is pure Senryu. Any which way it is a prize worthy write. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/17/2010 4:25:00 AM

lets hope it's actually a snryu? ... indicates the cut? and I believe it should be in both haiku and senryu but am not sure?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2010 4:25:00 AM

good morning D.G., just here stopping by to read and say hi,..p..d.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/16/2010 8:52:00 PM

Nicely done Deb...the cut cameo reference is super. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2010 7:39:00 PM

Strong and powerful Senryu . What wonderful images... bookmarks of passion. Nice interpretation ''backlit dawn lovers" Seems to be a winner

Heidie Buys

Date: 5/16/2010 3:52:00 PM

Awesome and vividly painted. Well done. Love Heidie

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/16/2010 6:41:00 AM

me like me like like 1st line and imagery is none but perfection gl in contest I too offered my services for this one lol love yours keep that pen aflowing

....Backlit Dawn Lovers

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