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Your Dream In My Subconsciousness

This smother of pillows without my twin where Palovian frisked skin only falls far in conscious sleep.

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 11/15/2023 10:54:00 AM

Poetry both reading it and writing it for me is very eloquently described in this poem. Given how much we have shared in each other's work I hope I've invoked similar feelings in the things of mine that you have read. It's an honor to even know you exist! A.S.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2023 6:09:00 PM

Love it!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/13/2023 4:20:00 PM

Paige, I found this poem to be really creative and intriguing, and I loved reading it.

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2023 1:49:00 PM

You did this form very well...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 4:36:00 AM

a powerful read with an understanding of dreams and the subconscious. Reminds me of Jung and his words about dreams. I love the Pavlovian reference! It was subtle but deep. A well written Ninette, Paige. Have a splendid day, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/12/2023 11:07:00 PM

very clever and "tantalizing" ? poem, enjoyed reading yann

Paige Hind
Date: 11/13/2023 3:31:00 PM

It means no matter how your conscious sleeps, you're still remembering someone in your subconscious, even if not conscious.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/12/2023 10:19:00 PM

This is such a deep poem, you have deep understanding or have studied about dreams and consciousness and Pavlovian very well. Its amazing how you’ve delivered this is the form of ninette. Love that. So clever. I enjoy always reading you

Paige Hind
Date: 11/13/2023 3:32:00 PM

Hey. This is completely just metaphor- I haven't studied anything, lol- I know of Ivan Pavlovian only a little bit.