You Still Suck

strange how his mind has changed
sounding more like you, deranged

as you rule from your throne of pain
treating others feelings with disdain

bless the babies born and not
you can't handle what you've got

never done you any harm
your anger truly does alarm

I'm not the critical type
you mistake reality for hype

much more calm today
time eases some pain, some way

challenged by a poet to rhyme
here ya go, this time, I'll fall in line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/29/2011 9:12:00 AM
Great angry poem... a good slam.
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Date: 5/29/2011 7:09:00 AM
Creative and interesting write, kristi
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