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Write With Your Heart: 12 Lines

The darkness had begun to take hold, Consuming my inner self, I'm told. Then through the darkness I start to glow, With little steps, I'm taking it slow. I break free of the darkness inside of me, And use my past to help others feel free. Shining through all the pain and lies, Shedding myself of fasad and disguise. Aware, at some level, I will shine bright, Stand out through the darkness, and give off light. "Without the Dark, We Wouldn't See the Stars" October 10, 2013 Write With Your Heart

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Date: 3/18/2014 4:14:00 AM
You always seem to come up with a good end line or two. I think Facade is what you meant not fasad. Sorrry if i misunderstood
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Jamie Grattan
Date: 3/23/2014 1:39:00 AM
Thank you and yes you are right, Façade, should I correct it? what do u think? J-Me
Date: 11/14/2013 5:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jamie
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Jamie Grattan
Date: 3/23/2014 1:40:00 AM
Thank u very much J-Me

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