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Wraithlike Snow

wraithlike snow rising breath of white ice tears stream

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 7:51:00 PM

This is beautiful. All the way through, each word, each line, and then the end. Perfect. Congratulations on your first place in the contest. Excellent writing, my friend. Love, Deb

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/25/2011 9:53:00 AM

A really great entry, has something quite special and unique. Congratulations. Déirdre

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie, for the 1st place win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:21:00 PM

WOWIE, Deb. TOP DOG!!! congratulations on your HAIKU!! Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 5:19:00 PM

beautiful, congrats on your first place win in the contest Debbie

Rick Parise

Date: 1/24/2011 3:22:00 PM

Congrats to you #1~soupmail~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2011 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:18:00 AM

thumbs for the top win, deb lights!! amazing! whoot!.. need i say more?? :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Deb. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:44:00 AM

Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2011 8:16:00 AM

Hooray for you.....!!! Yours stands apart from all the others!...well deserving yahoo for you!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:38:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your first place win in the haiku vs. senryu contest... awesome..luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/17/2011 2:29:00 AM

Hi Deborah, enjoyed reading your Haiku today and thank you for your note on my Limerick (nerd). I changed it today and hope that it is ok as an entry for your contest. Have a nice week! Love, Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2011 3:37:00 PM

wow, this could be both haiku OR nature. since it involves concepts from both worlds. That middle line is so awesome. This is not for any contest is it? Practice is making perfect! a 7. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2011 1:30:00 PM

wraiths are ghost like entities in Scotish myth LIght & Love

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/16/2011 12:29:00 PM

Nice Senryu...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 10:24:00 AM

Great image here, Deb. I wasn't sure what "wraithlike" was, but can relate to wrathlike snow. Love, Carolyn

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/16/2011 2:45:00 AM

Wow, perfect imagery of the snow weeping its melting phase away and its breath being like mourning sighs of grief - wow indeed! Thanks for your welcome comments and judging of contest, pleased you enjoyed the write, much appreciate being placed too of course! ;D Anna-Marie.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2011 4:01:00 PM

Good one..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/15/2011 2:56:00 PM

Very unusual metaphor... wrathylike snow, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2011 2:29:00 PM

Lovely but snow is not my friend these days .. too much of it.. now my entry.. I read under Forms of Poetry the meter line .. 1,2,5 = 10 syllable... 3,4 = 7 syllables.. that is what I have.. tell me what is wrong then? and I want to use your title as the lead in line..I liked it very much..do if not by P.S. meter count .. what is the count please TEACH?