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Winter Dusk

Lily of the pond Receives the drowning sun ribs in the dew ripples © Mahtab Bangalee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 1/19/2025 8:25:00 AM
Great imagery in this haiku. Well done.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 1/19/2025 8:19:00 PM
Thanks, Dear Poet Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/16/2025 12:48:00 PM
I can see a scene in your lines Mahtab.' A Restful one indeed.)
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 1/17/2025 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet Joe Maverick

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