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sun hides in dark clouds
wind brings chills right to the bones...
icy branches hang

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/22/2012 11:10:00 PM
Exactly how it is, ever now, cold and windy. Hasn't been sunny in weeks.
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:01:00 PM
Another great descriptive poem from you CArol! So nice to see you putting up many poems. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:04:00 AM
cool, it inspires me to try and master the different forms of poetry
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Date: 2/1/2012 8:58:00 PM
Today the sun hid all day behind clouds, while the wind was not chilly to the bones nor icy branches hanging, I can see in my mind a memory of that time not long ago!!! lol Great write Carol!!!
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Date: 2/1/2012 8:23:00 PM
Carol, amazing haiku image.,. thank you..always...pd
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Date: 2/1/2012 8:26:00 AM
wind brings chill right to the bone! This has got me, Carol. Thanks for your wonderful words. Dinda
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:19:00 PM
I so appreciate the concise nature of haiku. And you have chosen an excellent combination of words.
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:30:00 PM
wow! talking about one powerful season. aptly describe Carol. beautiful haiku
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Date: 1/31/2012 5:44:00 PM
I meany to say poignant earlier...not pognant oops!
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Date: 1/31/2012 3:27:00 PM
Hi Carol, After reading this and your "Dream" poem, I'm reminded of how the simplest of poems can be the very beautiful. All of my life free verse and dramatic verse poems have come natural to me since I was a child along with the occasional lyrical verse. Other tpes of poems are often out of my comfort zone. Reading your poems reminds me that experimenting with different poetry forms would be helpful to me as a writer. Thank you, Regina
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Date: 1/31/2012 3:03:00 PM
What graphics from great descriptions you have created! You did excellent with this Haiku! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem today! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:41:00 PM
Great nature haiku, it captures the essence of winter rightly so, at least it's dark side :) Thanks for sharing Mrs. Carol.
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:59:00 PM
Carol hon you ahve 2 subjects perhaps 3 so you could have 2 or 3 haiku one on the sun, one on the clouds and one on the wind each with a different 3rd line HUGS Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:38:00 AM
Bodily rhythm of cold feeling in bones in winter season wonderfully worded, loved your fantastic haiku, bl
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:10:00 AM
An apt description of winter. Good haiku, Carol. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:34:00 AM
Yes - sounds like Saginaw Michigan, at least for the last few days. I shiver reading your poem, Carol, but enjoy just the same. Love, daver
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:47:00 AM
Brrrr....that's cold! Often the best poetry is short and poignant. And when the choice of words especially are as clever as must stand in awe! After reading some of your poems I must confess an apology for not reading them before. Jeff
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:27:00 AM
enjoyed reading your works today!!
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