Whirled Peas

The world is at peace. The inhabitants thereof, they are at war. ©3/5/2022 World Peace Poetry Contest

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Robert James Liguori

Date: 3/12/2022 6:24:00 PM

I wish the world was at peace. Your statement is though provoking! And yes people are at war! Short poem, but very powerful!!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/10/2022 8:03:00 PM

Great monoku with a punch of satire and irony. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/10/2022 2:54:00 PM

Wow! Totally profound. What you have said in 12 words speaks volumes! Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest~my favorite! :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/10/2022 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A true/wonderful write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day...............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/7/2022 11:43:00 PM

We think you've written the 'Last Word' on Whirled Peas, alright. ~ John and Yoko

Deb M

Date: 3/5/2022 7:15:00 PM

So very true John….it’s humans who are not at peace. Very cleverly written….few words big message! Lovely. Debx