Wherefore Art Thou Spring

lingering for hours - the cold-soaked feet under socks woolen and heavy 4/1/2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/4/2019 4:35:00 PM

I refuse to take off my fluffy socks, but when they get wet, oh, my, they are so uncomfortable! Your poem has made me want to jump into a hot bathtub of the hottest water, to warm up, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2019 7:18:00 PM

Cold-soaked feet more a metaphor :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/2/2019 8:53:00 AM

A good one dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2019 5:48:00 AM

This haiku contains that impact that all haiku need Kim! Well done! : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Connie!