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When In Love

WHEN IN LOVE


When in love,
Our vision obscured is 
By 
The mist of passion, 
Thus
We can only grope our way 
Towards the
Threshold of happiness,
Sadly though, missing it
Most of the 
Times! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
     27  MAY 2013

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/27/2013 11:34:00 PM

Excellent. Very true and nicely said. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/28/2013 12:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Ravi for your visit!

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/27/2013 7:53:00 PM

What takes us hours to write, you write them in few words, what a masterpiece this is. So down to earth. Love it. Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/28/2013 12:03:00 AM

Dear Therese, how kind of you to visit! Thank you so much, my friend, for your kind and generous comment!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/27/2013 11:45:00 AM

Very true. You still remember your days in teen love? I enjoyed.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/27/2013 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Manel for your visit! The heart is always in her...teens!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2013 11:42:00 AM

ahhh, the challenge of love so well penned withphilosophical touches ... an endearing piece that one can always reflect on... beautiful!..:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/27/2013 12:05:00 PM

My dearest Nette, thank you for your visit for it is always welcome!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/27/2013 6:02:00 AM

What insight you have my friend! I just love reading your Epigrams, because every-time you have such wisdom within each line! What a delightful write you have written here Demetrios, a far superior poem! I loved reading your immensely amazing piece this morning, what a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/27/2013 10:10:00 AM

Thank you my friend, you always kind and generous!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/27/2013 5:57:00 AM

Interesting work that you have penned..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/27/2013 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Sara! Always, because of my profession, try to write on things others do not write about!