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wabi-sabi stains, etched upon our soul characterise struggles, that make us whole vanishing ink cognised by inner eye that with feet on ground, we reach for the sky reuniting with source, our earth life goal stepping lightly along the pathless path each moment in time, a holy sabbath we relinquish control through surrender embracing life, like a child in wonder fearing no longer, destiny spawned wrath wheel of time displays, our footprints on sand then, as now, we walk with God, hand in hand 30-April-2021 (syllabic rhyme) "Footprints" Old or New for a Prize Poetry Contest Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 5/5/2021 10:40:00 AM
Truly we are never alone Seeker! There are always a dual set of footprints - ours and God's - "hand in hand." Such comforting words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Date: 5/4/2021 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful Rhyme.
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Date: 5/4/2021 10:42:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/4/2021 7:38:00 AM
I love the rhyme form you chose, U.S., and the way you trace our footprints in the sands of life. The last couplet truly touched my heart. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for gathering us all together by hosting the contest, Carolyn! Thank you!
Date: 4/30/2021 8:58:00 AM
Yes! Let us release our grip, and embrace life, as you say, in wonderment, like a child! ~ Sabbatean
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Date: 4/30/2021 9:35:00 AM
So simple, isn’t it?
Date: 4/30/2021 4:36:00 AM
To walk with God hand in hand. A lovely thought. Tears wiped away. Just a lovely day.
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Date: 4/30/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by Kim!
Date: 4/30/2021 3:06:00 AM
An intelligent argument on life.
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Date: 4/30/2021 7:12:00 AM
A way of life ...

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