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Vicissitudes of Spring

Raindrops sprinkle spent dogwood petals on the lawn While tiny bluebirds perch in nearby mulberry, stalling, Awaiting the drizzle’s end, fussing at a week-old fawn Who grazes unaware sharp crystal droplets are falling, Raining down like tiny sharp fragments of shrapnel. Afternoon planting, too, must wait ‘til morrow’s dawning Lest fragile seedlings, soaked through, hear death’s knell, Rotting from the roots, fall over, their life withdrawing The vicissitudes of spring promise both life and death: The mingling of joy and sorrow, reflected in nature here On my lawn, in my garden; mirroring life’s fragile breath, Proper Mother Nature making her message indelibly clear. Ranked 54th in Poetry Soup's 100 Top Poems

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Date: 3/17/2021 2:24:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. "The vicissitudes of spring promise both life and death: The mingling of joy and sorrow, reflected in nature here " Romantical.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/16/2021 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful Milton. I'm still anxiously waiting for the frost danger to end. Great lines here. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Judy. It was a fun write.
Date: 3/16/2021 12:49:00 PM
It is always wonderful to get back outside and work in the garden as spring arrives, Milton. There is little I enjoy more and I get the feeling you feel the same. God bless Mother Nature for bringing spring to us! Lovely poem that makes me want to go outside. Hugs, Carolyn
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 12:58:00 PM
So true, Carolyn, so true. This afternoon, I sat on the front porch in the warm breeze for the first time since last year! Spring is my favorite season because it promises summer is coming! I hope you get outdoors soon.
Date: 3/16/2021 9:39:00 AM
Every season is two-faced, but spring is often the worse wearer, at least in my neck of the country. March and April are often the most treacherous, with windy nor'easters and flooding rains, or frozen ground thawed to deep mud by unexpected high temperatures, making a quick end to welcoming flowers and newly prepared gardens. Of course, as New Englanders we're use to that. / Maurice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 9:47:00 AM
I've never lived in New England, but I would suspect what you said. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. I always pay attention to what you say, Maurice.
Date: 3/16/2021 9:28:00 AM
What Gershon so eloquently said. Well done my friend. ;0)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Richard. Spring is tricky, and there are so many poems written about spring. I guess I just felt compelled to add to the mix. Thanks for coming by!
Date: 3/15/2021 8:01:00 PM
Wonderfully themed, Milt: Nature as a mirror to life, and vice versa. Life and death, with some unaware, and others victims of the cruel roulette wheel. Lovely penned! ~ Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/15/2021 8:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. I have been writing too much for contests, so it was nice to just let the Muse flow and do something for the sheer joy of it. Your thoughts are so appreciated.

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