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Vent Session

Venom rushes toward her heart via her veins Elle tastes her rage Nearly choking on the poison in her mouth Talking seems a waste of time Sophie insists Elle resists, but Soon relents and Sets to pouring it all out In no time she feels better, Out with the bad blood, like letting leeches suck her dry Nothing cures an ill spirit faster than a good friendly listener

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/9/2008 2:21:00 PM
Vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in this one. Interesting use of the acrostic form. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/8/2008 12:01:00 PM
So true....we all need to have someone who understands our need to explode at times...and loves us in spite of it! That's a good friend!! :) ~Carrie
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Date: 10/8/2008 10:14:00 AM
Autum I reckon those are some of the truest words that I have read in a while - God Bless
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