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Velvet Smoke

The lights are low, the air is thick with sin,
a lazy sax moans soft against the dark.
She sips her drink, red lipstick on the rim,
her gaze a flame that flickers with a spark.

The piano sighs, each note a lover’s touch,
fingertips tracing secrets on the keys.
She hums along, just barely, not too much,
a whispered song that brings men to their knees.

Her laughter drapes like silk upon the night,
a promise spun in amber, warm and slow.
She leans in close, her eyes a hungry light--
a queen who knows they’ll beg before they go.

The music fades, the spell is cast, complete.
She leaves alone--but hearts still burn like heat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 6, 2025 at 8:24 PM
Like breathing
Leach Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:16 PM
What a lovely thing to say--thank you, Bias. That means more than you know.
Bordner Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:53 AM
The definition of vixen Alesia. Superb atmosphere, personality and moral through your exquisite metaphors. It's a pleasure to envision the poetry of your passion...J.A.B.
Leach Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Oh Justin, you always know how to make a poet blush! I’m so glad the vixen’s voice came through clearly--this piece was all about mood and mystique, so your words are deeply appreciated. Thank you for letting yourself be swept into the smoke with me!
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