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Vampires Suck

It creeps up behind you It takes your soul In a dark state Everything is cold Mind is disturbed Nerves are wrecked Sucking the blood From biting your neck Extinction of the sun There is no light No pigmentation Only pale,all white Garlic,crosses You try to kill A stake at the heart Then it'll reveal Like a cat with 9 lives But only has 1 It's coming for you Can't hide,can't run

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/11/2012 12:56:00 PM
okay I am here.... ooo loving this one..I think I'd rather not run... i want this bite... LOL... I'm a sucker for zombies and vampire flicks... lol...call me crazy and lame.. I like the way you describe "extinction to the sun"".. don't you find the glittery vamps from twilight a little dumb... LOL.. okay, i did enjoy the movies... cheers to this poem, not disappointed at all :-) pd
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