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Traveling With Deborah

These tears in my eyes come from missing you No point in my trying to diminish their flow, For they reappear with special memories They persist in following me wherever I go. How I remember our hours on the beach Alone in beautiful exotic Antigua, just us two, Snorkeling in crystal-clear waters of Montego Flying out to see the pandas in San Diego Zoo. Then, holding each other tight in ol’ San Juan In Puerto Vallarta, while the mariachis played, The long trip to distant Aruba with friends in tow We talked of Costa Rica, wishing we’d stayed. Holding my hand as Kilimanjaro came into view The incredible days in Tanzania, making friends I shall never forget visiting Anne Frank’s home Strolling the streets of Amsterdam, Netherlands. Other adventures, twice through New England Our driving trip through England, Scotland, Wales, Following the Lincoln Trail on our honeymoon, Our time together is rich with travel tales. Our last was a home trip on Amtrak’s finest Around the country from coast to coast You enjoyed it so much, although you were ill, I think I’ll always cherish this train trip the most.
Written October 17, 2022 [In memory of Deborah, who took her greatest journey on November 20, 2018]

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Date: 10/21/2022 2:07:00 AM
I read about Anne Frank's home and sobbed and sobbed. I cannot fathom actually being there! I love it that you and Deb had such a love!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 8:49:00 AM
There's an eerie feeling of being in Anne Frank's presence in the house. I shall never forget the experience.
Date: 10/18/2022 5:37:00 PM
Milton it was so nice to see the places you and Deborah visited, the memories you made in those places will always be cherished. You got to do with your wife what many never accomplish in life, to travel and to have the pleasure of doing it with a loved one. So glad you and Deborah enjoyed those special places of beauty and pleasure... Thank you for sharing...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2022 7:08:00 PM
Ah, thanks so much, Michael, for your sweet and thoughtful response to this poem.
Date: 10/18/2022 1:51:00 PM
This one is replete with wonderful and adventurous memories you had with Deborah. Your poem contained many of the places that Vera and I visited during our wedded journey - Bob H
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2022 4:15:00 PM
I'm so glad you were at some of these places, Robert. Then, you know how beautiful and inspiring they are. Deb and I loved to travel more than anything else. We loved planning and executing our trips.
Date: 10/18/2022 4:29:00 AM
You have a treasure trove of beautiful happy memories Milton they are yours to reflect on and to enjoy until you meet again. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2022 7:56:00 AM
I think so, Tom. Thanks so much for your encouraging comment on my poem.
Date: 10/17/2022 8:27:00 PM
Specials memories are very when with your beloved. Great travels visiting different places abroad. Great tribute to your wife.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/17/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Of course, Deborah was my wonderful traveling companion, too. She always said when she was diagnosed with terminal cancer that she was about to embark on the greatest journey of her life.
Date: 10/17/2022 7:19:00 PM
What amazing adventures!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/17/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Becky. See my response to Eve.

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