TRANSPORTED

The transport - imposing, loud, on time.
Rising smoke, intoxicating black cloud.
She steps past the tracks, onto the platform.
Ebonic eyes float up to her waiting kin.

She ascends the steel stairs, as hearts
Beat faster, and shyness slides behind
Mom and Dad. Dark braids, high cheeks,
Red lipstick -  all envelops her mystique.

Melodic voice, a fashion designer. She
Arrives from the Big Apple - New York City.
She seems quite like Auntie Mame,
And Like That Girl,  cute and single.

She’d collect Egypt, Africa and Europe;
Display them and marry a movie star’s son.
Like Brady Bunch Jan, she interests me.
The transport leaves its tracks behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 15, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Kim, your description is truly remarkable and highly innovative.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much, dear Lasaad!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Quite a description, Kim. Very original. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Thank you! We would pick up our relatives from a very cool Train Station!
May Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 2:18 AM
Her mystique is woven throughout the poem, Very nicely penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Thanks, Joe!
Hind Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Flashy! Hug, just me! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you! Hugs, Paige!
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