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TRANSPORTED

The transport - imposing, loud, on time. Rising smoke, intoxicating black cloud. She steps past the tracks, onto the platform. Ebonic eyes float up to her waiting kin. She ascends the steel stairs, as hearts Beat faster, and shyness slides behind Mom and Dad. Dark braids, high cheeks, Red lipstick - all envelops her mystique. Melodic voice, a fashion designer. She Arrives from the Big Apple - New York City. She seems quite like Auntie Mame, And Like That Girl, cute and single. She’d collect Egypt, Africa and Europe; Display them and marry a movie star’s son. Like Brady Bunch Jan, she interests me. The transport leaves its tracks behind.

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Date: 11/15/2023 5:55:00 AM
Kim, your description is truly remarkable and highly innovative.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Lasaad!
Date: 11/14/2023 3:30:00 PM
another fabulous creation, Kim...the title worked well as 'she' was transported onto the platform. You described a beautiful lady via references to Auntie Mame, etc. She interests me too. Am faving this....have a great evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/14/2023 7:34:00 AM
Quite a description, Kim. Very original. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you! We would pick up our relatives from a very cool Train Station!
Date: 11/14/2023 2:18:00 AM
Her mystique is woven throughout the poem, Very nicely penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 4:51:00 AM
Thanks, Joe!
Date: 11/13/2023 7:25:00 PM
Flashy! Hug, just me! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 9:07:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs, Paige!

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