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TOOTH BRUSH

I didn’t scoff the grub; for pleasure and sanit I scrub. To doff trite piece of food is my calling from the wood When man meets assorted meat, I grieve for the chewing treat. I’m man’s aurora friend. Like the Ultimate man, to the very end I search for decayed morsel particle; to restore man’s fresh breath is my hustle. Cast me away and man’s teeth will hide; his tongue won’t glide – that’s my pride. I’m his quotidian servant-master adorned with creamy butter to evict stinking gums from vocal isle. Never weary, I renew his oral smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/23/2012 9:37:00 PM
You are very talented, Angel. If anyone could write a poem about toothbrush and made it so interesting, he got it! Love ya, Toquyen
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Ajayi Angel-Simon
Date: 12/25/2012 7:32:00 AM
thanks Toquyen... Love... Angel
Date: 11/27/2012 9:18:00 PM
Angel, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
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Ajayi Angel-Simon
Date: 11/28/2012 3:15:00 AM
thank you pd. Love
Date: 1/26/2012 5:08:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Angel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 11:01:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Angel. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Ajayi Angel-Simon
Date: 4/19/2012 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Carol...
Date: 1/25/2012 10:37:00 AM
Very well done Angel,like it :) - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Ajayi Angel-Simon
Date: 4/19/2012 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Anne... Enjoy the series of ur poems i'v read...