Too Real

Bright lights alley fights murdering friends over dubs.
Hefty price nothing nice too many has been.
Gun totting ninjas sewer rat room.
Attitudes bigger than the new york skyline.
Everything based on a timeline.
Petty cash used for hash.
Women bashing, tongue lashing.
Unwritten rules, city life blues.
Lipstick stains, menstrual pains.
If we break these chains our freedom we'll gain.
People claim their real yet are called downtown to cut a deal.
How can you look in the mirror each day knowing your taking someone’s freedom 
Away?
Hearts smothered in malice, hands cold as ice.
With knives being thrown around we're sure to end up six feet under ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Brandi, Congratulations on having your poem featured. It is a well deserved honor. This poem is powerful. Keep Writing. Lovingly Dane
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Hey Brandy well done on the feature ! Great work to !
Joseph Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 8:27 AM
way to go...congratulations
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Brandy. May you have many more.Love, Carol
Tugaff Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 12:48 AM
So deep. I have to re-read to grasp the the message. I love it. More power and success. Congratulations. I have also a featured poem. Ernilando
Orozco Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Wow, this really made me think, its soo true! Well done, please keep posting as talent speaks from your very heart, and I stand here to hear it all.- jeremiah
Shahwan Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 6:30 AM
This poem urges readers to think. Beautiful poem.
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