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For Bitesize No99 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

You would think I'd leave every kind of woe in the by and by and the long ago, and each awful, agonizing pain, I'd never want to live over again. Yet, when I recall my young heart broke in half, I softly chuckle, sigh, and laugh.

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Date: 2/8/2025 8:25:00 PM
"Yet, when I recall my young heart broke in half" - anyone who undergoes such agonies can easily understand your lines.—very poignant yet lively poem. Congratulations!
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David Crandall
Date: 2/8/2025 9:30:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj!
Date: 2/7/2025 8:47:00 PM
Well written dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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David Crandall
Date: 2/7/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thanks Thriveni!
Date: 2/7/2025 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this , (for me,) wee bit nostalgic poem. Well done David. Cheers
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David Crandall
Date: 2/7/2025 7:31:00 PM
Thanks Margaret! I'm glad you could relate to it, somewhat, if in a good way.
Date: 1/24/2025 7:24:00 AM
Exactly. Doesn't hurt so much anymore so we can look at things more objectively
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David Crandall
Date: 1/24/2025 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Tom!

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