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This Year In English Quintain

Someone is knocking at my door The night’s cold, my world’s dying and drear It’s Good Joy. Cheers! No more, no more Oh dear, I cannot open the door for her Sorry Joy, glide by, I’m sick and not in my gear. Someone is knocking at my door The night’s cold, my world’s dying and drear It’s Good Hope but I can’t be lured. In dark shadows I grope, what makes you come here? I know you mock the life, glide by, I desire. Someone is knocking at my door The night’s cold, my world’s dying and drear Oh, It’s Good Health. This year you won’t be ignored Welcome, I dart my doors open for you, dear. I do need nothing but your blessings this year.
+++ January 15, 2015 Form: Quintain (English-ABABB)

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Date: 1/15/2015 4:02:00 PM
Wise words indeed Dr Mehta - good luck in the contest:-) If we have good health we are truly wealthy! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2015 3:31:00 PM
Good thoughts you finish with in this, for the year ahead, Dr Ram.
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:39:00 AM
Cheer, hope and health... a good quintain with a valuable message...blessings
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:26:00 AM
I love the wisdom of this well-written quintain, Dr Ram...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
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