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he tossed her aside like an unwanted rag doll rich man’s plaything 8/12/18

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Date: 8/17/2018 6:06:00 AM
Oh, wow! This is so true in so many awful, horrible ways. Wow! No other words come at the moment, Jan.
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:09:00 AM
Powerful!
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Date: 8/15/2018 8:32:00 AM
Back to add nicely penned, Jan. A full story in three little lines.
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Date: 8/13/2018 2:50:00 AM
- Money and power, have no feelings - Excellent written, Jan :) - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2018 3:50:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 3:50:00 PM
Yeah, I feel kind of bad about that. I didn't know you were going to write a poem about it though!!.....;0) (It's a good one though!!)
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Date: 8/12/2018 5:40:00 PM
ha ha ha Pat your secret is safe on here - shhhh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 3:00:00 PM
Some "Sugar Daddy" "mature" to have a "Trophy Wife"; its a living, but not much better than having a dozen brats! The "Upkeep" is very, very draining, but no one writes about that! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/12/2018 3:08:00 PM
you should write about it Rico!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 2:45:00 PM
Pointed penning! It certainly happens. xomo
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Date: 8/12/2018 2:47:00 PM
It sure does Mo:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 12:53:00 PM
They think having money gives them the right to treat people like a piece of dirt. Sadly some girls get sucked in with the promise of the good life. Tom
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:08:00 PM
Yes Tom sadly some people are so easily bought and then find they are easily tossed aside when the sweetness has worn away:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 12:43:00 PM
Loved it...
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:07:00 PM
thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 12:26:00 PM
Hi Jan, such is life, love the content of your senryu. So true, the way things can go. Have a wonderful end to your weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 10:37:00 AM
Never know how these things end.
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Date: 8/12/2018 10:38:00 AM
So true Line:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 10:27:00 AM
They have no conscious
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Date: 8/12/2018 10:37:00 AM
I guess it works both ways Tim, the lady can get lots of 'gifts' for her services then get traded in for a younger model:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/12/2018 10:20:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Jan. Is it true that she killed him later that year?...lol. Warren :)
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Date: 8/12/2018 10:36:00 AM
LOL I could always do a follow up poem Warren!:-) hugs jan xx

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