the wind

poppies sway and breeze 
ripples retract on old pond 
wisp of hair on face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/10/2023 3:26:00 AM
Nice poem!
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Karen Croft
Date: 11/10/2023 3:27:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/9/2023 9:12:00 PM
Very few words but much imagery
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