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The Secret Lives of Chimney Pots Iv

Pied tidings of suburbian 
Magpies,
Squawking and squabbling,
Quarreling ferociously among 
Themselves - 
Rush to steal
From off the beleaguered bird 
tables,
To the annoyance of all concerned,
A much begrudged meal;
Before scurrying away into 
Unfrequented woodlands,
Marooned like islands in the 
Midst of becalmed yellow seas,
To pervade the shifting groves
With their fractious demands...
When violently quarreling over
Ill-gotten troves
Like double-crossing thieves
And masked brigands;
Or murderous pirates dividing into
Groups
Spoiling for a fight -
Behind drawn up lines in the hot,
White sand!


Soon, where presently the
Swaying oceans
Of ripened and bronzed corn,
The galloping sounds of many 
Drumming hooves,
The flash of red-crimsoned 
Hunting jackets -
And the chill tooting upon the
Masters deathly horn!
When contained behind Hawthorn 
Hedgerows
And inside Five-Bar gated fields,
Deep within the stiffened stalks
Wherein the nesting Harvest mouse
Cleverly conceals,
The threshing of mechanically
Rotating flails 
Over the rumbling sounds of
Monstrously turning wheels...
Trundling remorselessly past
The succumbed swathes
Of a golden harvest -
When surrendering the generous
Bounties
Of her reaped and plentiful yields!

Down past the pristine shrubbery 
She briskly trips -
Gliding serenely past the 
Multi-coloured Asters
And rigidly standing, upright tulips.
Each counted minute staggers and
Sneaks...
Into the next counted minute where
Boredom keeps;
And brightening rays fall thicker
Upon Noon...
As shortening shadows recede from
Over her idling commune.

A squeaky side gate swings open
Tensioned throughout a long 
Strained, objectionable creak,
As her precious bundle from a 
Designer-label buggy takes an 
Inquisitive first peek.
Throwing all in the car, irritated 
By the school playgrounds hub-bub
And agitated squeal,
She accelerates away in a frenzied
Rush -
Like Stirling Moss behind the 
Wheel!

Racing through the confines of 
Your average de-industrialised town
She wrenches in sheer exasperation 
Upon the gearboxes much maligned 
Lever: Up-down, down-up, up-down!
Completely oblivious to the 
Shuddering resistance of the
Sheering cogs awful grinding 
Sounds...
She wrestles with the complexity 
Of a shredding clutch -
Whilst loudly abusing and 
Berating her fellow motorists all
Around.

Zipping over Zebras and Pelicans,
Unconcerned with all manner of 
Indignant and unrestrained pleas,
She zooms along the not-so-open
Highways 
In varying indifferences of breathless 
Degrees!
Many types of vehicles of all makes
And designs,
Parked-in tight under identical 
Trees...
That are evenly set out in
Parallel lines.
A dazzling array of motors from 
Nations wide and far:
Cumbersome and vulgar 
Four-Wheeled drives - 
Macho appareled 
With chromed Bull-Bars,
High-sided (boasting proud livery)
White delivery vans 
Conceived and manufactured in 
Alien faraway lands.

Huge panes of toughened glass
Mirroring the inter-mingling streets,
Reflecting the ever changing tastes
Of the general populace,
Crammed with modern necessities
Displayed enticingly in beguiling 
Replete.
For throughout every fashionable 
Season,
We, the pots, have beheld:
The evolving visage of our frontages
Where successive generations of your
Forefathers...
Demonstrating practiced temperance,
And in all good faith,
Once satisfactorily dwelled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/28/2017 9:13:00 AM
What the chimney pots saw; man and all his foibles. Good moments too but they fade rather quickly I think. It is our bad habits that endure. Coming to the end sigh! Again I congratulate you on an awesome write.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/16/2017 10:06:00 AM
I intend to re-edit (as always) and continue onwards at some point in the future with these, as you so ably put it, snobbish pots...but first -- the Meretrix has some unfinished business - oh dear! My dearest wishes, Patricia. :) john
Date: 8/6/2017 11:23:00 AM
I can see the "Secret Lives of Chimmey Pots" going into a book with the illustrations and me queuing up to buy the first book - Amazing write ups and to make sure you have missed nothing you have given us the whole picture of the life evolved around these "Chimmey" pots with more to come - Brilliant - "If I was "God" I would "Anoint" you - "But" if I was a "Publisher" I would "Appoint" you - Never enjoyed the life of a "Chimmey" pot so much - Indiana .. . . ; )
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John Fleming
Date: 8/7/2017 3:21:00 AM
Hi, Indiana - What a fantastic tribute you do so accord me! I think this has to rank as among one of the finest reviews I have ever received for one of my poems - A big thank you! Much obliged for taking the time to visit and leave such glowing praise...it is very much appreciated by me. My warmest regards, Indiana - And my very best wishes as always! :) john
Date: 3/13/2016 11:38:00 PM
The colors in your descriptive lines held me spellbound John. I loved this inspiring piece. Bravo! #7. ;)
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Date: 3/14/2016 1:02:00 PM
Hi, Connie. What I am trying to do, with various degrees of success I feel, is give the reader not just an idea of the community I live in (outlying area of a once industrialized town) but all the other areas in and around it: Suburbs, countryside, villages; plus of course anything else I can cram in there - Lol! Not an easy task but I am moderately happy enough with it; there needs to be another three or four editions yet to finally "box" it off. Glad your enjoying it so far, Connie. My very best regards - And warmest wishes! :) john

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