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The Rose Inside My Heart - Mr

In the vast expanse of a mountainous highland, A pretty damsel joyfully waltzed around, A carefree lass, in the laps of bountiful nature, Until A Prince trotted by, and magically found. The Prince wandered for hundreds and hundreds of miles, searching for the maiden he saw in his dream, Stunned and astounded was he - was she truly real, The ethereal girl he searched for, was in front of him! From his favourite royal horse, promptly he alighted, didn’t hesitate a moment to reach his decision ! This was his enchanting beauty - body and soul, How could he miss the angelic fragrance, and the vision. Besotted with her charm, the Prince came closer, Kneeled in front of her, she speechless with emotions, “There is the Rose inside my heart” he declared- “red and trembling,” “I found you to offer my devotion”! March 24, 2023 Inspired by "Rose Inside My Heart" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose Checked by HMS.com and Rhymezone.com

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Date: 3/24/2023 11:02:00 PM
Nicely penned story of love. Wishing you all the best, Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/25/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. Appreciate your encouraging comment.
Date: 3/24/2023 6:08:00 PM
A lovely fairy tale in a gorgeous poem! What can be more adorable than a rose inside one's heart? Rose wilts and dries, but a rose inside a heart shall not perish. Best wishes in Mystic Rose' contest! Welcome back to Soup. (^___^) JCB
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/24/2023 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Dear JCB. We all love fairy tales which end "lived happily ever after". That's what we want! So, "the Rose inside my heart" will definitely bring a beautiful romantic ending! Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 3/24/2023 1:49:00 PM
- Like a beautiful fairy tale with a happy ending ... wonderful poem, Mala - Good luck in the contest ... I'm sure this is a top winning poem :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/24/2023 1:51:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, thank you so much. I couldn't think of anything else other than a fairy tale - with the phrase "the Rose In My Heart"! Hugs ~ Mala

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