The Return To Rotgut Part 1

They say he had three Mothers
The Earth, the Wind, and Water
And His father was the Sun
And the Moon was his daughter 
He wore a gun in his belt
With clothing made from hide
As He walked, He made no sound
And never broke his stride

Folks say he was part Cherokee
Others say, part Crow
There wasn't any clarity
There was no way to know
He wore a shiny locket
On the inside of his shirt
That he took out of the pocket
Of a dead Comanche’s' skirt 

The feather in his hat
Made the white folk all take notice
And on his belt a sack
With an ancient Aztec Poultice
The myth, was he knew magic
Taught by spirits raised by  Shamans
And because His birth was tragic
He was thought to be a Demon 

As he passed through our town
The People, looked away
Afraid of being cursed
They where glad he didn't stay
The sun sank in the East
As the wind blew from the West
And he walked in a straight line
Like a man bent on a quest

He climbed up to the foothills
Where the Injuns made their graves
There he raised them from the dead
As he made them all his slaves
No one knew his purpose 
For the dead upon that mound
Not at least, until that day
He came back to this town

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/30/2014 9:14:00 AM
I read #6 and decided I had to search the rest. So, here I am and don't regret it. As a big western fan I love it.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/30/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, of all the stuff I write, it's the western stuff I enjoy the most
Date: 8/15/2014 4:50:00 PM
a wonderful rendition Jerry superb pen hugs
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/15/2014 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, I hope you will like the ending
Date: 8/15/2014 2:16:00 PM
Great story telling! Have a read through I think you need a small bit of editing.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/15/2014 4:58:00 PM
Richard, if you don't mind pointing it out for me, I would appreciate it, Thanks
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