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the ponding - a period of deconstruction: A Boketto Poetic Form

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Poetic Form: Other/Tanka & Haiku (or Senryu)
Inspired: 2024 February 01

Poetic Form: Other/Tanka & Haiku (or Senryu)
The writer; will allow the MOMENT to indulge the subject matter where there'll be no future and no past, just what may influence the MOMENT.
Two Stanzas:
1st Stanza (5 lines, 30-syllables) 7,7,7,4,5.
2nd Stanza (3 lines, 17-syllables) 7,7,3.
The last 3 syllables will act as a refrain for a String of Boketts

Image; N/A

an artesian altar stocks moist manna seized in vast rounds twice arrested sights cascade moment instills reawakening a sheltered reckoning breathes no regrets prepped ascensions ~a ponder

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/1/2024 4:43:00 AM

this poem is deep thanks to your outstanding imagery. I especially liked "moment instills reawakening.' Your poetic voice shines in this creation. have a great day, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2024 6:13:00 AM

Your wealth of happiness, Sara, exceeds each passing day, my friend, Aloha, William