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The Oregon Trail

Leaving behind the city grime and angry crowded streets of crime. The chimneys belching smoke and ash clinging to the window’s sash. Filling wagons with prized possessions, facing our westward journey, like hessians. “Westward Ho” was the call of the day; we began our journey without delay. A caravan of hopeful dreams driving cattle herds in teams, facing the harshness of rough terrain wind, sand storms, and pouring rain. The journey hard ~ without remorse, losing lives throughout our course. Crossing rivers and narrow mountain passes, where rocky paths where thick with brush and grasses. Fighting Indians and thieves we managed to survive through cholera and wounds ~ the lucky stayed alive. We buried souls in shallow graves ~ as we travelled on our way, marking stones and crude crosses, we knelt down to pray. To lessen our burden we made concessions left behind ~ our family possessions to arrive where the mountains meet the sky and nights illuminated with stars up high, where fertile valleys wave and roll filling our dreams, filling our souls. The Oregon Trail brought us here, building a life, in a new frontier.

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Date: 2/8/2024 8:03:00 AM
Dear Paulette, Your poem, is a captivating journey in itself. Your words transported me back in time, making me feel as if I am a part of the caravan, facing the same challenges and sharing the same hopes. The hardships and sacrifices made and the sense of relief and accomplishment they must have felt upon reaching their destination. Your poem is a beautiful tribute to the indomitable spirit of those who dared to dream and dared to pursue those dreams, no matter the cost. Blessings,-Daniel
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/8/2024 11:28:00 AM
Daniel, thank you for stopping by and I appreciate your thoughtful comments. I am glad my poem was able to resonate with you so deeply; and to share your understanding of the sacrifice these pioneers experienced, to follow their dreams. Blessings to you too! Paulette
Date: 1/29/2024 2:25:00 AM
I used to love cowboy stories. Grew out of them somehow. Yet you wrote a poem full of emotions.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/31/2024 6:42:00 AM
Victor, so glad you enjoyed it; especially that it brought back fond memories for you. The life of pioneers was one of strong will, fortitude and dreams. Take Care, Paulette
Date: 1/26/2024 9:28:00 AM
Great tale, Paulette, the arduous journey and hardships faced by pioneers as they traveled westward along the Oregon Trail in search of a new life. The diction used in the poem is evocative and vivid, painting a clear picture of the harsh conditions and the determination of the pioneers. Well done
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/27/2024 9:05:00 AM
Hi Sotto, thank you for your kind words; it is nice to know my words painted the picture of strife, struggle and determination from these pioneers. Thanks for stopping by! Paulette
Date: 1/26/2024 12:30:00 AM
Love cowboy poetry, this is right up my street. Hope you're keeping well Paulette. Tom
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
Tom, glad you enjoyed it. Yes, the pioneers were the real cowboys and girls; their determination was inexhaustible. Thanks for stopping by. Paulette
Date: 1/25/2024 7:07:00 PM
Great narration! Enjoyed reading, Paulette!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
Hi Kim, thanks for stopping by to read my Oregon Trail tale....glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. Paulette

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