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The Man In the Mist

~~oooOOO The Man In The Mist OOOooo~~ Going to my cousins house, a long drive in the car Over the moors with dry stone walls, it was very far The house in the middle of a field alone and swathed in a mist The owls hooting, bats flying, but any trees I must have missed. “The sea mist is in” my cousin said, “lets go inside now quick.” A man was standing in the shadows, in his hand was a stick. The waves were nosily rolling in as she pushed us through the door A quick glance behind me as I entered, the man was no more. “Who is the man outside?” I asked as she drove huge bolts home That is Fred our ghost, we had a séance - and now he’s on the roam. What do you mean? He haunts this place, and his name cannot be Fred And people that died long ago do not come back - they are dead. Fred says he lived where the barn once stood there are owls and bats there too But since we called him he wants to enter the house – a chill wind blew. It’s when the mist rolls in, we find we must lock and bar all the doors If you hear footsteps in the night stay in bed until they pause. That night in bed the light went out; my little sister was afraid The sheets were damp the mist inside, so a small request she then made Mandy can I sleep with you I am scared and I am so very cold? I said "jump in but make it quick", but I did not feel really bold. Her footsteps came round the bed and she sat upon my feet "Get off my feet and into bed then perhaps this cold we will beat." Her little voice came to me - from her own damp dark bed I haven’t got out of it yet, I was looking for my teddy bear instead. I peeped over my bedclothes and saw a shape sat on my feet "Oh no" I cried "Fred’s in here, do you think he wants to eat?" My little sister whispered, "please don’t say that it's true What is he here for Mandy”, she whispered “what is he going to do?” My body shaking, my mind in tatters - a ghostly hump sat on my bed My heart beating loudly; the hairs prickling and standing on my neck and head. "Please Fred what is it that you want, please don’t hurt us here?" My sister whimpered under covers, "If he is dead, how can he hear?" The ghostly hump of Fred lifted suddenly from my feet I saw him shake his stick I thought us he was going to beat. He waved the stick, the misty room cleared, the light suddenly came back on I put my head under the covers and when I peeped over he had gone.
By Mandy Tams 22/04/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2013 8:16:00 AM
amazing i have an oldie of yours i 've not seen, oh it is all there, Mandy Tams the wonder poet, wow you are pure poetry yourself i'll have you know...
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Date: 5/30/2012 8:34:00 AM
I am glad I choose this one Mandy to make your acquaintance!!! Suspenseful all the way through!!
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Date: 5/5/2012 10:05:00 PM
wow, you did it good and scary, mandy!! hey, long time no see. Glad I stopped by this list real quick to see you on it. Congrats.
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Stranded/Ghosts" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:53:00 PM
So GOOD! alot of tension and a different ending with a good ghost!! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:36:00 AM
Wonderful write ~GG~ and with a moral!! Well Done! I love your work...you are so gifted...(check 2nd line last verse ? typo?) Fabulous scary tale...good luck in the contest...big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:41:00 AM
Thanks D, I ve put it right. Thanks for reading it is a true story as well the house was eventually knocked down as things got worse.xx
Date: 4/22/2012 3:09:00 AM
WOW ABSOLUTELY STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!I enjoyed this much.Thank you for sharing.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/22/2012 3:42:00 AM
Thank you Elliott I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment xx

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