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The Listening

Like children at play I hear them babble, Ever skipping away Over rocky rabble And all ten toes On my own two feet, Watching as it goes Before I retreat These eyes alone Caught rainbow trout, His home below shone With the dawn about Was swiftly running Throughout the wood, And deeply sunning As best it could The coldest brook Born of the snow, Months it took For spring to show Clearest river waters Were ever glistening, I stood, a squatter, For the listening.

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Date: 7/21/2023 1:59:00 PM
A gorgeous poem Kelly that flows so well with an intriguing title too.Really enjoyed it. Thank you!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/10/2024 5:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Christina :)
Date: 5/8/2023 12:59:00 AM
Such a lovely and brilliant rhyme poem my dear poet friend. A rhyme poem that both children and adult will enjoy. So well-crafted my friend. I love it a lot. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your pen. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/30/2023 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much... I am so glad you enjoyed my poem :) Hugs :)
Date: 5/7/2023 12:01:00 PM
Your great imagery is interesting and your creativity is striking in this well-written poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/28/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 5/1/2023 8:29:00 AM
I enjoyed "The Listening" write.  Have a great/blessed day...............
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2023 9:48:00 AM
I am so glad you did, Paula :)
Date: 4/27/2023 11:26:00 AM
Interesting and creative poem. Well done :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/22/2023 10:24:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi :)
Date: 4/26/2023 6:23:00 PM
I would have done the same, Kelly. Nicely penned. I first thought it was going to be a fishing poem. This was better:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/16/2023 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel :)

Book: Shattered Sighs