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He poked the sleepy fire Then sat back in his chair Removed his reading glasses Brushed back his cotton hair A quick glance out the window Wishing for a reprieve Hoping someone might drop by On this lonely Christmas Eve He heard some people caroling Strains of "Oh Holy Night" Gave his dog a pat Eyes watered at the twinkling lights The fire crackling, glowing red Tired eyes of a similar hue He drifted off to sleep To the silent late night news While the old man slept An angel came a calling She lightly kissed his head In dreams the snow was falling He saw a little boy In pajamas all excited A Lionel train circling the tree A new bicycle parked beside it The stockings hung the night before Were stuffed with candy and treats Everyone was unwrapping gifts Their love providing the heat His mom was there on the sofa Her face so young and pretty His Santa Clause dad, passing out presents Trying to be joyful and witty He saw his brother and sister A long ago Christmas day Sharing an old fashioned Christmas In their family old fashioned way As he dreamed he began to smile The angel was standing by She bent to kiss him again A tear escaped her eye The old man sagged in his chair A big smile on his face There would be no more lonely Christmases They were together again in one place by Daniel Turner

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Date: 12/4/2016 5:08:00 AM
So beautiful what a wonderful story you wrote it so well I really enjoyed it x This will stick in my mind for a long time, Fantastic x
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/4/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Mrs Wendy. You're just too sweet:)
Date: 12/3/2016 1:39:00 PM
A great write like always..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/4/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thanks DT
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/4/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Pashang. Nice to see you my friend:)
Date: 12/2/2016 9:50:00 PM
wow, Daniel, what a poem this is. A heart wrenching gem for the seaason.
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Date: 12/4/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. You should be happy that he's not alone anymore and back with his family. It's not really supposed to be that sad:)
Date: 12/2/2016 7:50:00 AM
Lovely, Daniel! I've saved this as a fave! 7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/4/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Kim. You are so kind:)
Date: 11/27/2016 2:55:00 AM
Daniel you are a master at bringing feelings to the surface. Rather sad or happy, you bring those feelings out. This warmed my heart. I would have loved to have had that kind of Christmas. Beautiful! 7 : )
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/4/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Connie. I appreciate your kind comments and support:)
Date: 11/26/2016 7:44:00 PM
You want me to cry, right? You touched on your reality, wove in fantasy and stitched a real tear jerker. It works. Yi, Daniel - this is most dramatic so I have to find something funny. Maybe Jan's page ... CayCay (be you Soup gone for awhile?)(not that you can answer me, if gone)
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Date: 12/4/2016 8:39:00 AM
No, don't cry. Be happy he has joined his family again. Thank you CayCay:)
Date: 11/24/2016 3:12:00 PM
Ahh, an unexpected ending..I enjoyed reading this one with it good flow and great rhyme..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Mrs Sara. It's always so nice to have you visit:)
Date: 11/24/2016 2:44:00 PM
my,my.. you stirred my senses with this glorious poem, daniel...love how the whole scene unfolded...greeat stuff and huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, nette. I appreciate you dropping by to share your smile:)
Date: 11/24/2016 6:29:00 AM
Oh my Danny, chills up my spine! A bittersweet rendition, holidays are rough no doubt, being reunited, no matter the distant dwelling, is most we can ask for at times. Lovely rhyme scheme, albeit forlornly depicted. 7+
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Paloma P
Date: 11/24/2016 8:00:00 AM
Holidays are a lonely time for many. OH, that song makes me wanna cry! Happy Thanksgivings nonetheless, my talented friend. :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/24/2016 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Paloma. Holidays are a lonely time for me. I'm sure you remember the son Cat's in the cradle by Harry Chapin, that was me always busy so now my kids are just like I used to be. Working through the holidays. I appreciate your friendly visits:)
Date: 11/24/2016 5:47:00 AM
Though a foreigner, i felt myself inside the poem ... the past in a tint of green ... a smile serene ...
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Probir:)
Date: 11/24/2016 12:36:00 AM
I was in the scene as I read each word, Daniel:) beautifully written, though a little sad:) and "a tear escaped her eye":) a 10 from me:)
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Jo. You are so kind. I appreciate your support and friendship:)
Date: 11/23/2016 10:39:00 PM
I saw and felt it all. It was a sadly happy ending. Very nice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/24/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Franklin Glad you liked it:)I appreciate your support:)

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