The Lang Leav Irony

I mock your verses with a sneer,
Call them basic, insincere.
Hide your books beneath my bed,
Curse the simple words you've said.

Yet in darkness, truth comes clear:
Your pain and mine, they mirror near.
Each criticism that I throw
Masks the feelings that we know.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 12/8/2024 3:25:00 PM
I love the rhymes and word scheme! you have talent :3
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Date: 12/8/2024 4:26:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much!
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