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The Lady and Her Birds Friends

Everyone knew her as Lady Summerworth,
A title she had assumed from mother earth.
She was rich, did what she liked, spoke to no one.
She'd have her breakfast and left when she was done.
Then she would walk slowly to the far garden,
If she would forget the birdseed, beg pardon.

It was her delight to scatter crumbs and seeds.
Sterlings, chaffinches, thrush and blackbirds each feeds
Until they were well-fed with the fare she gave.
Oft she claimed: was she the Lady or the slave?

The nursing home clanged its bell. She went for lunch,
Alas, a heavy rain drenched her like a punch.
She spent many days with an ugly bad cold.
She was old now more than seventy years old.
Yet every day was visited by her friends
All the birds came until the lady's life ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kiser Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:53 PM
That picture reminds me of the scene from Mary Poppins, with the song, "Feed The Birds"; there are those who revel in giving, even to the tiniest souls. Beautiful Victor.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:06 AM
What a beautiful picture, and a perfect story for the picture Victor... what pure friendship between the lady and the birds... so well penned... God bless... ~ Ani
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July 11, 2021 at 6:28 PM
That’s so lovey Victor, birds, same as animals, know when someone is kind and to be trusted and will also feed them.. Belle
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 12:25 PM
- A great little story, Victor ... her dear friends until the last day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 10:13 PM
A sad poem, Victor. Well written and said. You reminded me of my brother and sister-in-law next door. They have a few parakeet, a couple of cockatoos, and about 15 Conures. Then in the back yard they have a table full of seeds so the outside wild birds can come and dine..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Great story! Was she the lady or the slave?
Buehler Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 10:50 AM
The friendship between the lady and her birds, makes a charming poem. I especially love the first two lines, but the entire poem is captivating. Hugs. :)
May Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:55 AM
The birds remembered her kindness and were there till the end, Very nicely penned Victor
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Ahh!! It would be nice if the nursing home residents could get out but where my husband's sister is she can't even go to the dining room to eat lunch. They will let her walk down to her husband's room to see him at least once a day. When my father was in the home, he would go walking every morning. He walked around and around the nursing home trying to walk a mile.I enjoyed reading your lines about this person at the home. Sara
Poet Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:23 AM
This is a lovely poem, Victor. The birds were loyal to her. She found solace in knowing that you, Victor, had provided her with a gesture. The birds show their appreciation for her. Alas! All good things, even a beautiful lady, must come to an end.
Skelly Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 5:35 AM
We would be bereft if the birds deserted us. So many things change in old age, but this love never deserts us.....Nice one Victor.
Pandit Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 4:31 AM
She found her comfort --you gave her a voice, Victor. The birds thank her. Alas! good things come to an end--a sweet lady.
Daniel Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 3:48 AM
They sure were loyal to her, Victor, a wonderful scene you paint with your words:)
Seeker Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Small pleasures, amplified by love!
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:10 AM
A heartwarming verse Victor, bet they were glad to see her each day. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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July 9, 2021 at 11:22 PM
A lovely scene, enhanced by wondrous poetry. Soup mail Victor.
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