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Everyone knew her as Lady Summerworth, A title she had assumed from mother earth. She was rich, did what she liked, spoke to no one. She'd have her breakfast and left when she was done. Then she would walk slowly to the far garden, If she would forget the birdseed, beg pardon. It was her delight to scatter crumbs and seeds. Sterlings, chaffinches, thrush and blackbirds each feeds Until they were well-fed with the fare she gave. Oft she claimed: was she the Lady or the slave? The nursing home clanged its bell. She went for lunch, Alas, a heavy rain drenched her like a punch. She spent many days with an ugly bad cold. She was old now more than seventy years old. Yet every day was visited by her friends All the birds came until the lady's life ends.

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Date: 7/15/2021 6:53:00 PM
That picture reminds me of the scene from Mary Poppins, with the song, "Feed The Birds"; there are those who revel in giving, even to the tiniest souls. Beautiful Victor.
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:06:00 AM
What a beautiful picture, and a perfect story for the picture Victor... what pure friendship between the lady and the birds... so well penned... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/11/2021 6:28:00 PM
That’s so lovey Victor, birds, same as animals, know when someone is kind and to be trusted and will also feed them.. Belle
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Date: 7/11/2021 12:25:00 PM
- A great little story, Victor ... her dear friends until the last day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:13:00 PM
A sad poem, Victor. Well written and said. You reminded me of my brother and sister-in-law next door. They have a few parakeet, a couple of cockatoos, and about 15 Conures. Then in the back yard they have a table full of seeds so the outside wild birds can come and dine..
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Date: 7/10/2021 7:13:00 PM
Great story! Was she the lady or the slave?
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:50:00 AM
The friendship between the lady and her birds, makes a charming poem. I especially love the first two lines, but the entire poem is captivating. Hugs. :)
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Date: 7/10/2021 6:55:00 AM
The birds remembered her kindness and were there till the end, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 7/10/2021 6:28:00 AM
Ahh!! It would be nice if the nursing home residents could get out but where my husband's sister is she can't even go to the dining room to eat lunch. They will let her walk down to her husband's room to see him at least once a day. When my father was in the home, he would go walking every morning. He walked around and around the nursing home trying to walk a mile.I enjoyed reading your lines about this person at the home. Sara
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Date: 7/10/2021 6:23:00 AM
This is a lovely poem, Victor. The birds were loyal to her. She found solace in knowing that you, Victor, had provided her with a gesture. The birds show their appreciation for her. Alas! All good things, even a beautiful lady, must come to an end.
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Date: 7/10/2021 5:35:00 AM
We would be bereft if the birds deserted us. So many things change in old age, but this love never deserts us.....Nice one Victor.
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Date: 7/10/2021 4:31:00 AM
She found her comfort --you gave her a voice, Victor. The birds thank her. Alas! good things come to an end--a sweet lady.
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Date: 7/10/2021 3:48:00 AM
They sure were loyal to her, Victor, a wonderful scene you paint with your words:)
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Date: 7/10/2021 2:19:00 AM
Small pleasures, amplified by love!
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:10:00 AM
A heartwarming verse Victor, bet they were glad to see her each day. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/9/2021 11:22:00 PM
A lovely scene, enhanced by wondrous poetry. Soup mail Victor.
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